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miles davis and being comfy by ~enchantmentx:iconenchantmentx:

Categories Photography > Still Life

©2004-2009 ~enchantmentx
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Artist's Comments

Boy to Girl:

"I just remembered that time at the market.
You snuck up behind me and jumped on my shopping cart
And rolled down, aisle 5
You looked behind you, to smile back at me
And crashed into a rack full of magazines.

They asked us...if we could, leave.

Can't remember, what went wrong last September
Though I'm sure you'd remind me.
If you had to.

Our love was comfortable
And...
So, broken in.

I sleep with this new girl
I'm still getting used to
My friends all approve
Say she's gonna be good for you
They throw me, high fives

She says the bible is all that she reads
And prefers that I not use profanity
Your mouth, was...
So dirty.

Life of the party
And she swears...
That's she's artsy.

But you.
You could distinguish...
Miles from Coltrane.

Our love was comfortable
And...
So, broken in.

She's perfect.
So flawless.
Or so they say...

She thinks I can't see that smile that she's faking
Or poses for pictures that aren't being taken.

I loved you, grey sweat pants, no make-up, so perfect.

Our love was comfortable
And...
So, broken in.

She's perfect, so flawless.
I'm not impressed.
I want you back."

Girl to Boy:

"Get a life" - Click.

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What do you guys think about the rounded corners?
Yes. No.
Tell me, tell me.

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~answers Sep 16, 2004, 2:23:13 PM
i am also a fan of gray sweat pants. really like this angle. really cozy feel. in your eye.

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:bulletgreen: in this part of the story, i am the one that dies . . .
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~answers Sep 16, 2004, 2:23:57 PM
i am also a fan of gray sweat pants. really like this angle. really cozy feel. in your eye.

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:bulletgreen: in this part of the story, i am the one that dies . . .
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~finraz Sep 16, 2004, 2:25:31 PM
Oooo Love the colors AND I love Miles Davis.........I need to find some vinyl.

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~lostharmony Sep 16, 2004, 2:56:05 PM
the framing is done really well, reminds me of my photos from the 60's and 70's :)

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Art is the desire of man to express himself
To record the reactions of his personality
To the world he lives in.
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~crossmyheartandhope2 Sep 16, 2004, 4:40:14 PM
thats awesome!! I love the angle on the picture... and it reminds me of a takingbacksunday song.
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`slvrmntzn Sep 16, 2004, 8:22:49 PM
Such blissful depth. Unreal tonal work too. And finally a description that I can lose myself in alongside the picture. I love how the picture can be seen in abstract, mundane or sensual ways. It works across levels. It just works, damnit.

heart it. heart it!
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~Vord-exe Sep 16, 2004, 8:59:02 PM
You've been a busy girl haven't you.
The sense of Woosh is great in this one.
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~jonefe Sep 17, 2004, 7:00:08 AM
corners don't look smooth.
great shot.
i like the writing.
at first i didn't like the ending. then i started to like it. just because it didn't end so cliche. but what i still don't like about the ending is the words she uses. "get a life" doesn't sound right for that ending. but fuck it. it's good.

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